music of revenge :thriller and other thriller ideas not used
This story is about a girl and boy who were both blessed with great talent which singled them out and made them special in comparison to the average human. Both humans were able to play the piano with such talent at such young ages, they played with grace and beauty that drove their audiences wild.
However they both wanted to determine who the better player was. The girl was voted most creative and the boy felt jealous and angry as in the public eye she was a better piano player. The girl suggested they should have a competition to see who was the more talented player. In anger and envy the boy agreed.
They both shared a great passionate love for music, something that few people could relate to as it took over both their lives and it was what they lived for.
The boy with deep pressure and stress goes slightly mad and kills the girl before the competition as the chance of losing was unacceptable for him and he did not want to be known as a failure. The girl’s spirit lingers over the boy for months he feels the presence but never really acknowledges it. The boy of course is now classified as the world’s most talented piano player. The pain that the girl feels as a ghost is excruciating and she despises the boy as he stole her passion and fame through death.
She haunts him and decides he will pay for his sins, she kills him. The girl comes behind the boy in a practice room she strangles him and shuts his head inside the piano, she then plays the piano that his blood is covered with and has a content look upon her face.
some other thriller ideas …..The main character sits opposite her twin sister, suddenly the lights go out and something holds her back and parralises her but theres nobody touching her or in sight. When the lights come back on and she is able to move, her twin sister is hanging in front of her..situated in a play roomOran ex boyfriend stalks his beautiful ex girlfriend and has intentions to torture her as she dumped him and broke his heart for another guy. The girl has run away to the country side and believes she will be safe there however her ex works for the CIA and gets hold of gadgets easily he tracks her down and takes advantage of her isolation her friend who came with her to the country was missing and a horrible smell is smelt under the bed
Title retribution
•Key character: ex sico heartbroken stalker boyfriend: Dominic
•The exceedingly beautiful blonde girl called kitty
•Stalker Dominic takes advantage of scared kitty as she is in isolated country side, she is first aware when she smells a strange horrific smell she looks under the bed and its her best friend who came with her dead circled with blood she looks over towards the door and a heart with a picture of kitty is stuck on with the blood of her best friend
•Takes place in the deep isolated country side
•Dominic does it as he was obsest and heart broken over his girlfriend he wants revenge and he becomes deranged and deadly, dominic has family history of mental illness which can only be kicked of with an immense amount of sadness and stress
Act 1
•Dominic and kitty where high school sweethearts, both very popular and very well behaved. Dominic went on to working for the CIA and kitty decided her feelings were not as strong as they used to be all those years ago.
•Dominic came home fro m work and kitty explained to him how she did not love him anymore, she knew he would re act badly but not as badly as he did. Dominic begged her and forced her to stay locking every door and securing every exit possible, in fear kitty smashed the downstairs window in the middle of the night and escaped to her best friends house down the road. She ran covered in mud in her night down to her best friends house who happened to be a neighbor she escaped with her best friend d and decided she would be safe in the deep country side however Dominic was clever and had access to gadgets and tracking devices through his work. Kitty drives the next day to the supermarket to get food for her and her friend when she arrives back she smells a strange strong disgusting smell that is coming from under the bed she slowly looks under and its her best friend suddenly she looks over at the door and she sees her picture that Dominic took of her pinned up covered in blood.
The situation going from bad to worse act 2
•Kitty is dripping in cold sweat with a look of shock painted across her face after encountering the smell of death and the image of her best friend dead underneath the bed covered in blood was imprinted in her mind. Dominic and kitties best friend Chloe were also very close Dominic and Chloe were as close as brother and sister which made the situation stranger and more terrifying for kitty as he has the strength to kill someone so close to him. The grief of Chloe did not start as the shock and terror held it back. kitty wanted to get out of the house as she assumed Dominic was inside the house.
•Kitty runs outside in a panic to get far away however she slams the door which creates a loud noise and therefore indicates to Dominic her location in panic kitty trips on a branch, footsteps can be herd from behind her she gets up and screams as her hair is pulled back and she is pushed onto the ground
•A quick glance of the blooded axe makes kitty think quickly. Thousands of ideas in kitties head were making here look more and more panicked her white face, torn clothes with mud and dirt Stains dramatizes this scene. She slowly knowing she is in the presence of Dominic reaches for her phone as she hears the footsteps she knows she can not run an idea sprung to her mind.
Act 3
•Kitty is in a state of terror and shock she slowly looks up and meets her eyes with Dominic. He looks down at her with a loving yet guilt and sorrowful look upon his face. Dominic looks at the axe and then again at kitty, Dominic suddenly lifts his arm up with the axe and utters “I am sorry if you are not with me you can not be with anyone”
• kitty yelps, cries and begs for him back telling him how much she loves him, she told him that it was a mistake breaking up with him demanding a divorce and she said she will love him forever for she knew it was her only hope of survival. He surprisingly throws the axe beside her and embraces her in his arms, squeezing her a little to tightly, suddenly kitty grabs the axe and hacks him down with her eyes shut. Dominic dies and kitty calls the ambulance and police once she gets in range.
film’s USP
•This film is different from others because it is a husband and wife who were happily married who were fortunate enough to live a luxurious life style their life changed dramatically from normality and happiness to a sudden psychotic death chase. Dominic did not have any track record and was a naturally calm and understanding, level headed man.
•This film contains gore and suspense and ensures the audience to have a thrilling experience.
•An audience will expect the film to be edgy, filled with terror, tension, thrill and suspense. An audience also wants the evil murderer to die or be locked up in the end, as it creates a sense of reassurance in reality
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